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Penta-Ciquain: Circle of Life, Written by Toni L.A. Cross 12/8/09

Hey everybody! Sorry for not posting for a while… its all the fault of the weather! We had blizzard conditions and went to hunker down with an elderly relative who doesn’t have internet.



brand-new life

kicking and screaming

foreign frightening noisy world




still breathing

gasping oxygen in

joyous thrills of adrenaline




connected hearts

pulsing beating rush

intimately becoming one being




fading gray

slipping away slowing

memories joy sorrow pain




ice cold

still and silent

not feeling anything forever



 This poem is part of an experiment I am doing to try out the different forms of poetry. Keep an eye out for upcoming attempts.


“Cinquain: This is another unique type of poetry style. As the name suggests, it is made up of five lines. The first line is just one word, which is often the title of the poem. The second line has two words which describe the first line. The third line has three words, and is mostly the action part of the poem. The fourth line is four words describing the feelings. And the fifth line, again, has just one word which is the title of the poem.”


About goatgirlbookworm

My name is Toni Clegg, and I was raised on a farm in the far north of the United States. I love to read and write and I hope to use those hobbies in a greater way in the days to come. One of my passions is using whatever influence I have to make a difference in the world.

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